Feedback and what I plan to change...

Mr Fords Feedback

• The COVER with no black splodges
• The mast head is too small
• No colour scheme
• Resize the image, Cover
• Move all of the text down the page, Cover
• Big gaps between 'While She Sleeps', Cover
• Boring 'Interview Inside', Cover
• Not sure if black boxes work well
• 'Your Poison' introduction too wordy, Cover
• Font doesn't work, Contents
• Duplicate page numbers, Contents
• Layout doesn't gel, Contents
• Image needs work, should be clearer, less shadowy, Contents
• Too much space at the bottom of the article, DPS
• 3 columns on each page, or 2 with more text, DPS
• Need images, DPS
• Different sized font on each side, DPS

Low Level 3

Mrs Abrahamsons Feedback

•  Excellent level of care and detail in research and planning
• Lots of detail and ideas in magazine, article is convincing
• Model looks good
• No black splodges, Cover
• Avoid 'Find out who' Make it snappier, Cover
• Consider changing the text boxes, Cover + Contents
• Consider the text change for the white text, doesn't look edgy enough, Contents + Cover
• Has a radically different feel to it; not as edgy, Contents
• The blank wall is used as background for both photos, needs changing, Contents + Cover
• Kats facial expression is aggressive, but pose is not, possibly try posing in a different way, Cover + Contents
• Could Zach have drumsticks, Contents + Cover
• Need to make the articles fit the cover lines and main artists featured, DPS

Level 2/3 Border

My Plans for change

• Change the masthead font, Cover
• Change the image, Cover
• Change the text content, Cover
• Change the font, Cover
• Change the layout of text, Cover
• Change the colour of the text on the front, Cover
• Change the brightness/contrast on the Cover
• Take away the black boxes and put a 2cm strip at bottom with competition advertisement, Cover
• More text on Cover
• Change the models outfit and appearance, maybe try with no lipstick, or a different colour. Also alter hair so it is larger.
• Change Zach's outfit, a band top.
• Put both 'Kat' and 'Zach' on the Cover together having a laugh, with DRUMSTICKS as a prop
• Include a COLOUR SCHEME throughout, blue, white and black
• Completely change layout of Contents, have a box with a live image maybe of Kat or Zach, with three columns with text for the page references. Include more artists and page references.
• Change font on Contents
• Make sure that brightness is up for any images used Throughout
•  Check spelling and grammar!!!!!!!!
• Check page numbers, Contents
• Change font at top, Contents
• Put more images on possibly, Contents

I am completely changing my double page spread as I want to do an interview for it, therefore I shall make it so that an image is covering one page and there is a pull quote on the image, as well as the name of the artist enlarged in a 'fun' font. Also, I am going to stick to the colour scheme of black, white and blue, with the questions being in blue, the background being black and the answers being in white. I am also going to test out different fonts to use for the pull quotes and the interview itself. I shall also be taking more images for it, including the two artists being featured together!