Question Two

Question Two

Question Three

Two Modifications!

Even more Modifications!

FEEDBACK

DPS
Odessa in red on dps
Smash should be SMASH in explicit font
Call an ambulance in a coloured circle

More Modifications!

FEEDBACK

COVER

Move down the text on the right in line with plus

Name people from the posters

CONTENTS

Do numbers on contents in same font as EXPLICIT
Change the image above the Editors letter for DPS

DPS
Change call an ambulance to red
Centre align Odessa smash..
Lower S for Smash
Align all columns together
Odessa moved slightly to the left
Centralise call an ambulance, looks wonky

AFTER ALTERATIONS FROM FEEDBACK

FEEDBACK

COVER 

No one wants posters of drumers. No one. Pick front men.

ODESSA still too high up, it needs to be where Asking Alexandra is, the bands on the right MUST be the same size as those on the left.

WHAT IS THE DATE KELLY THERE IS NO DATE!!!!

maybe EXPLICIT IN RED

CONTENTS

Can't read the text in blue. Avoid bold. Makes it seem too busy.

Maybe go three columns rather than 4?

DPS

Text beneath Odessa is too wide. Should be no wider than the title Odessa not the three columns

Still dont like the PULL QUOTE font. Try the ODessa one.

Lower case S for songs

Make the drop letter T the EXPLICIT T

Potentially Finished items

FEEDBACK.....

High level 2 low 3 currently. 

Masthead font colour makes it tricky to read. Change colour to Red or white.

Remember thirds. Break you page into thirds (horizontally). Odessa MUST be on intersect of the lower third (i.e. 2/3 DOWN the page or directly opposite the lad with the drum sticks). Currently it is way too high

The other text on the cover is MUCH TO BIG. Ideally that should fit beneath ODESSA in the lower third. Avoid page no's on the cover

Add a strap/banner at the bottom of the page about posters which you can find inside.

Contents High level 2 low 3 currently.

Who are Ellie and that Lad?????? put a page no and Band name next to them

Make contents (top right) smaller. Font size 14 will do.

Right align the text in the letter from the editor.

Description of what is in each section MUST BE NO BIGGER FONT THAN 11!!!!!

The contents should be pg 3 or 5. ALWAYS ODD NUMBER

Bottom right explicit and page no FONT SIZE 8-10 NO BIGGER

More NEWS needed

More live reviews needed.

Put exclamation mark after broken guitars

& NOT AND for Rise Alive and Your Poison

Add more hyperbole for New albums and list at least FIVE new albums you'll be reviewing

For opinionated TELL ME SOME SHOCKING THINGS THEY SAY

GIG GUIDE list loads of bands who you are reviewing

DPS High level 2 low 3 currently.

I REALLY REALLY LIKE THE RIGHT HAND SIDE WHY NOT USE THAT FONT FOR ODESSA?!?!?!

You need a comma after Rugby

Make page no's smaller again (see advice on contents)

Who wrote the article. Add the name of author at the bottom not in the top right

Try page no in RED

Put CALL A F'in AMBULANCE in caps and a different font to make it really pop off the page

Not so keen on the font in the article. 

Front Cover

I am unsure about the image on the left hand side of the page. I might be changing that feature, however I am unsure.

Double Page Spread.. Half Complete.

   5th of March 2013 update. Half completed.  7th March update. Article is half done, mast head and description done.



Possible Layouts

Odessa

I am going to be taking their pictures before their concert at the vault in rugby. The band have agreed for me to use them in my magazine, and to also take images of them during their set. However, I have been doing some research and some contacts in the music magazine business have told me that the best time to take images during a set is during the first 3 or 4 songs. I shall also be taking images of the support bands during their sets, however i am unsure of who they are.