Wednesday 13 March 2013

Two Modifications!



2 comments:

  1. On contents.
    Capital I needed in editor’s piece at top.
    Now needs capital letter.
    Also to do , not too do
    Lots of capitals missing – you ned them for starts of sentences, band names, titles of albums.
    BUT 100% improved from last time I saw it, well done.

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  2. 'were going to fuck things up' personal highlight!

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