FEEDBACK.....
High level 2 low 3 currently.
Masthead font colour makes it tricky to read. Change colour to Red or white.
Remember thirds. Break you page into thirds (horizontally). Odessa MUST be on intersect of the lower third (i.e. 2/3 DOWN the page or directly opposite the lad with the drum sticks). Currently it is way too high
The other text on the cover is MUCH TO BIG. Ideally that should fit beneath ODESSA in the lower third. Avoid page no's on the cover
Add a strap/banner at the bottom of the page about posters which you can find inside.
Contents High level 2 low 3 currently.
Who are Ellie and that Lad?????? put a page no and Band name next to them
Make contents (top right) smaller. Font size 14 will do.
Right align the text in the letter from the editor.
Description of what is in each section MUST BE NO BIGGER FONT THAN 11!!!!!
The contents should be pg 3 or 5. ALWAYS ODD NUMBER
Bottom right explicit and page no FONT SIZE 8-10 NO BIGGER
More NEWS needed
More live reviews needed.
Put exclamation mark after broken guitars
& NOT AND for Rise Alive and Your Poison
Add more hyperbole for New albums and list at least FIVE new albums you'll be reviewing
For opinionated TELL ME SOME SHOCKING THINGS THEY SAY
GIG GUIDE list loads of bands who you are reviewing
DPS High level 2 low 3 currently.
I REALLY REALLY LIKE THE RIGHT HAND SIDE WHY NOT USE THAT FONT FOR ODESSA?!?!?!
You need a comma after Rugby
Make page no's smaller again (see advice on contents)
Who wrote the article. Add the name of author at the bottom not in the top right
Try page no in RED
Put CALL A F'in AMBULANCE in caps and a different font to make it really pop off the page
Not so keen on the font in the article.
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