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No one wants posters of drumers. No one. Pick front men.
ODESSA still too high up, it needs to be where Asking Alexandra is, the bands on the right MUST be the same size as those on the left.
WHAT IS THE DATE KELLY THERE IS NO DATE!!!!
maybe EXPLICIT IN RED
CONTENTS
Can't read the text in blue. Avoid bold. Makes it seem too busy.
Maybe go three columns rather than 4?
DPS
Text beneath Odessa is too wide. Should be no wider than the title Odessa not the three columns
Still dont like the PULL QUOTE font. Try the ODessa one.
Lower case S for songs
Make the drop letter T the EXPLICIT T
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